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A love story between a vampire and a werewolf, but they're both secretly undercover agents in a supernatural crime unit.

Hm, okay, the set-up is neat, but if they’re undercover, wouldn’t their superiors have thought about the animosity between species? Seems like a risky move. Unless that's *part* of the plot and something bigger is at play? Anyway, make sure to flesh out the world-building. If there’s a risk of …
submitted 11 months ago by skeptical_critic