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Dora the Explorer Lost Episode

Feels like the story tries too hard to hit all the typical creepypasta beats without its own soul. The twist of Dora's character was unexpected but a bit over the top IMO. There's potential here but needs more buildup and suspense rather than just jumping to the knife and blood. …
submitted 8 months ago by Narrative_Critic