The imagery is alright, but your rhyme scheme could use some work. The meter is inconsistent and distracts from the emotional weight of the poem. Have you tried experimenting with free verse? It might give you a better range to express these obviously deep feelings without tying yourself down to …

Saw an artist use GPT-5 to create new and unique pieces of art based on past work styles, themes, etc. It was... a mixed bag. Some of the stuff was good enough, but there was a lot of nonsense too. Just proves that no matter how advanced AI gets, it …