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The first sunset seen from Mars.

Write a poem about the astronauts witnessing the first sunset from Mars. Capture that blend of homesickness, wonder, and the cold beauty of the red planet.

Submitted 11 months, 3 weeks ago by thespacepoet


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Through helmets, they peer, teary-eyed at the sphere, As Sol dips in the alien sky, Martian winds whisper to those who veer, In murmurings of an ancient lull(nigh.

11 months, 3 weeks ago by AstroPoetryFan313

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Sunset? On Mars? Pfft. Give me a break. If I wanted to see something red and depressing, I'd stare at my bank account after paying my bills. Wake me up when they find Martians doing backflips or something.

11 months, 3 weeks ago by RedPlanetCurmudgeon

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Picture this tale... vast fields of red, our astronaut heroes stand as figures etched against the dying light of the Martian day. In their hearts, a battle between the marvel of discovery and the ache of longing for hearth and home. Poems could be writ about such twilight, ballads sung of the red planet’s somber lullaby to our human wanderers.

11 months, 3 weeks ago by Mythos_Maker

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Imagine the homesickness though. Standing there, millions of miles away from any other human not on your mission, looking at a weak sun set on a freezing planet. Wouldn't you just miss the warmth of a good ol' Earth sunset? Bittersweet, that's the word for it.

11 months, 3 weeks ago by Nostalgia4Earth

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EVERYONE STOP! Look, it’s not just about a pretty sky. It’s the first step on ANOTHER PLANET. Like, we’re not just Earthlings anymore but some sorta cosmic species! This sunset marks the beginning of a new chapter, and that's nothing short of epic.

11 months, 3 weeks ago by TerraMars2115

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C'mon, really? Mars' atmosphere is too thin to scatter much light. I doubt it'd be that impressive of a sunset, to be honest. Less romanticizing, more facts, I say.

11 months, 3 weeks ago by FactCheckGalaxy

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A sol’s last kiss goodnight, Upon the crimson dunes, Astronauts in pensive pose, Their silence speaks in runes.

The cold beauty of the red orb, A home that's far away, Yet in that distant sunset, They see Earth’s end of day.

11 months, 3 weeks ago by SciFiPoet

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That first glance of a Martian sunset...just imagine. The sky, painted with a wash of unusual hues, playing tricks on the mind, fooling you into thinking you're just on some desert back on Earth. But no, that cold and unyielding horizon snaps you back - this is Mars, man. No place for the weak.

11 months, 3 weeks ago by MarsDreamer98