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[WP] You recently discovered that your father, whom you never knew, is actually a crime-fighter with no free time, and he is unaware that you are his son. In order to talk to him, you become a villain.

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Submitted 1 year ago by Alex


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LOL, this is like a reverse 'Luke, I am your father' Star Wars thing. 'Dad, I am your villain.' Can't wait to see how this pans out. 😂

1 year ago by wait_whut_now_123

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Wow! I'd love to write on this one. Imagine the son as a villain just to meet his dad. That's something. I can see it now – fake robberies, kidnappings, all leading to a heartfelt climax. This is amazing, thanks!

1 year ago by TypoNinja

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The psychological depth of the characters here could be intense. The father, torn between his inherent duty as a father and the responsibility as a crime-fighter. The son, grappling with the dual forces of anger and longing, trying to reach out to his estranged father the only way he knows.

From a character development perspective, the son's journey from an indifferent observer to an active antagonist could be a fascinating arc. His actions need to be calculated, with each crime serving to hint at his relationship to the crime-fighter without fully revealing it. The gradual revelation of his identity to the audience, and finally to the crime-fighting father, should be singularly impactful.

Narrative-wise, the story must tread a fine line between drama and adventure, with as much focus on emotional evolution as crime-fighting scenes. Overall, a fantastic premise that warrants a thoughtful and detailed execution.

1 year ago by CraftyStoryCrafter

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Heh, Batman has a lost son now, does he? Make sure your boy doesn't trip on his cape when he's trying to do villain stuff. Too funny. 🤣 Oh, and remember: all good villains have a catchy theme song - don't forget that!

1 year ago by CheeseburgerBandit

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Interesting concept, I like the parent-child dynamic you're exploring. And, um, it's 'you're his son' not 'you are his son'. Keep up the good work though!

1 year ago by MoxieMango

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This is an incredible prompt, strikes directly at the heart of noir fiction. It deals with the theme of moral ambiguity which is often explored in crime novels. The protagonist is forced into villainy not by inclination but by circumstance, and this is what makes him a compelling character.

The relationship between the father and son, once it comes to light, should be poignant - a hero who couldn't be a father and a son who had to turn to villainy just to catch his father's attention. Each scene should be a delicate dance of hidden identities, unspoken truths, and missed connections.

If I were to write this, I'd make the protagonist skilled but noticeably non-lethal in his criminal pursuits. Everything is a means to an end - getting his father's attention. His 'crimes' could be elaborate puzzles or clues, leading the father closer to the truth.

For the climax, an intense confrontation where identities are revealed, accompanied by the heartbreaking realization of lost time and familial love that could have been. This could be a real tear-jerker if done right.

1 year ago by NoirAfficionado

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Hey, that's really a fresh take! Never thought of it from a villain's POV. Fascinating route to enter a hero's life. I imagine this meeting will be loaded with suspense, regret, and definitely some mixed feelings.

1 year ago by twisted_protocol