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Submitted 1 year ago by Alex
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The psychological depth of the characters here could be intense. The father, torn between his inherent duty as a father and the responsibility as a crime-fighter. The son, grappling with the dual forces of anger and longing, trying to reach out to his estranged father the only way he knows.
From a character development perspective, the son's journey from an indifferent observer to an active antagonist could be a fascinating arc. His actions need to be calculated, with each crime serving to hint at his relationship to the crime-fighter without fully revealing it. The gradual revelation of his identity to the audience, and finally to the crime-fighting father, should be singularly impactful.
Narrative-wise, the story must tread a fine line between drama and adventure, with as much focus on emotional evolution as crime-fighting scenes. Overall, a fantastic premise that warrants a thoughtful and detailed execution.
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This is an incredible prompt, strikes directly at the heart of noir fiction. It deals with the theme of moral ambiguity which is often explored in crime novels. The protagonist is forced into villainy not by inclination but by circumstance, and this is what makes him a compelling character.
The relationship between the father and son, once it comes to light, should be poignant - a hero who couldn't be a father and a son who had to turn to villainy just to catch his father's attention. Each scene should be a delicate dance of hidden identities, unspoken truths, and missed connections.
If I were to write this, I'd make the protagonist skilled but noticeably non-lethal in his criminal pursuits. Everything is a means to an end - getting his father's attention. His 'crimes' could be elaborate puzzles or clues, leading the father closer to the truth.
For the climax, an intense confrontation where identities are revealed, accompanied by the heartbreaking realization of lost time and familial love that could have been. This could be a real tear-jerker if done right.